Tekkit With Woodsy!

[Woodsy23]

Ive recently started making youtube videos and I would like some feedback from you guys to help me?! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DzwhmGDjO-c&feature=plcp

[Techpriest]

I will give you a feedback when it is necessary. The necessary part would be right now.

Before recording, plan ahead, if you cannot plan ahead. Record the game without any voice. Then, play the replay of the game you were recording with your voices, so you don't start messing up by thinking on the video like umm for 0.3 miliseconds. That's a lot of time wasted.

[TheSamuraiGamer]

sound more lively and pre plan as you said umm alot and didnt sound that interested in playing the game