Rate my test commentary?

[MegaXarth]

Sup guys. I'm MegaXarth. I want to be a commentator.

Me and my friend austin got together to do a commentary sortof thing. Thats filled with mostly humor. Heres the link, comments please:

[Resource Inc.]

Dude your commentary is FINE!

[SpecialJay]

It's okay bro.

[MegaXarth]

I want to first BUMP then I want to tell you that as far as the quality and mics go.. We didn't do it well prepared, the quality wasn't good because Sony Vegas screwed me up, and as far as the mic goes, we already fixed that. But If you guys think It's alright I'll keep going. I'm young but I want to try at this.