So basically... it's computercraft, but with persistence, higher requirements, and some improvements. Regardless of what you say it's basically an improved version of the same thing. Maybe if a different language was used or something, you could say it isn't the same, but really, beating it into the ground that it's "different" doesn't accomplish much.
Don't get me wrong though, it is nice because CC is kind of unbalanced honestly, like what kind of computer is made out of stone? And persistence without extra coding is cool too. The parts portion is also good. It just frustrated me that you went out of your way to point out how "different" it is, when really it isn't. You should focus on saying how it's better rather than saying it's different.
